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Lies, Tears and Fears... by *moony-wentz:iconmoony-wentz:





Lies, Tears & Fears...
by: moony-wentz


I saw your eyes lit up when they locked with mine
A smile slowly painting your lips.
It's a wonder, how you keep me mesmerized
With every move you make and every touch of your tips.


Every second we've spent together
Each one's been etched on my mind.
That day you held my hand and said 'forever'
It gave me the confidence to call you mine.


A long time has passed and all seemed fine
You've found the one you've been looking for.
And now I realize that I have been blind
I never had you really, but I've always been yours.


As I cry myself to sleep, forgetting what I feel
It's true, a love between you and me could never be real.
No matter how optimistic I've been, you made me see
That diamonds do appear to be, just like broken glass to me....
©2008-2009 *moony-wentz
:iconmoony-wentz:

Author's Comments

so this is for :iconnarutoaddict765:'s and :iconbang-the-doldrums:'s contests!!
yes, two different contests.... :excited:
i won first for NA and third for BTD's contest! :w00t:

this is my first ever serious try on poetry...
i just hope i make some of you happy... :heart:
or feel something... :D

yes, the last line is from PATD... i was allowed okay? :giggle:
and that pic... they're all handsome right? :nod: :cuddle:

oh... yeah.. you decide which mind i used to write this... ;)

Comments


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:iconbang-the-doldrums:
:giggle: Of Course You Can Enter :D
I'll Put Your ENtry In My Journal.
Aaaanddd This Is Awesome :D I Loovee It. :heart:
You're A Really Good Writer.

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But when the weather changed,
Like fine print, you were hard to read.
Blindfolded, eyes wide open,
Staring through me

:heart:
:iconmoony-wentz:
wow... :wow: thanks a bunch!! :excited:

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:heart: If every simple song I wrote to you would take your breath away I'd write it all... :heart:
:iconpanicxfobx4everx:
You did a great job with getting me to feel something. Ive suffered through heartbreak after heartbreak and I can tell you...It makes you feel so alone it can be scary. And this lifted my spirits. Great job!!

--
Don\\\'t you know who I think I am?

Question: What\\\'s your favorite cartoon character?
Ryan: Aladdin, \\\'cuz he\\\'s fuckin\\\' awesome!

BEST CLUB EVER.
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I am Ryan Ross in dA\'s Celebrity Crew!!! Yay
:iconbang-the-doldrums:
:giggle: You're Welcome, Thanks For Entering :D

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But when the weather changed,
Like fine print, you were hard to read.
Blindfolded, eyes wide open,
Staring through me

:heart:
:iconmyjarofdirt:
This is freaking amazing!!!!

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You need to be broken because pain is the only thing that is certain.
:iconmoony-wentz:
ooh.. i was happy to., :cuddle:

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:heart: If every simple song I wrote to you would take your breath away I'd write it all... :heart:
:iconmoony-wentz:
thank you!!! :hug:

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:heart: If every simple song I wrote to you would take your breath away I'd write it all... :heart:
:iconmoony-wentz:
wow... :wow: thanks., :excited:

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:heart: If every simple song I wrote to you would take your breath away I'd write it all... :heart:
:iconcmj603:
Thats really good!

--
Urieligion is my addiction.

Well, I don't really remember, but I remember it being very pleasant. And something about duckies, as well.

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